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Monday, August 07, 2006

Unveiling

UNVEILING (Draft II)

Some days, a few words
scribbled down in haste,
a simple melody, a subtle
turn of phrase, unclothes

another’s world. And there,
beneath a supple shell, you find
a heart that bleeds;
it seeds itself beneath

the skin, you share the pain,
then seek to radiate the joy
their presence in the world
discloses. Some days you know

that you are not alone. The wave
that rises, through the words and song,
washes away your frown. You share
a smile, a caring strength;

you know your world
can never be the same.

Sometimes, a word of thanks reveals
that we can overcome;
sometimes a body sings the joy
of sharing; sometimes

we simply share
the pain of caring.




Malcolm Evison
06 August 2006

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Beautiful words Malcolm. A really lovely piece of work :-)

Malcolm said...

Thanks Martyn

Anonymous said...

A poem about love. Thank you, my dear old friend, you're writing about us!

TOF

Paul said...

Excellent. I like this.