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Wednesday, March 28, 2018

lines whilst listening to "New Thing at Newport" (1965)




Lines whilst listening to “New Thing at Newport” (1965)
[Draft 4]

the reeds stray
from strident to mellifluous  
Soaring and flailing through the air
dance and sing their way
                           
                        around and over percussive beats
release me from despondency
assure me that at least
                         I can still feel


                           Malcolm Evison
                            27 March 2018

Monday, October 10, 2011

PROMISE



PROMISE





and nightfall brings
the promise of release
from daily toil



the neon skyline
shimmeringly bathes
the arena of desire



in technicolour majesty





Malcolm Evison 

a few nights ago - in the wee small hours - these lines emerged, shaped and reshaped themselves, as I lay in that hinterland between wakefulness and restlessness - I scribbled them down before trying to settle back to sleep and I've just rediscovered
the scribbled note